Your story is delightful, @inessita. You capture the world of a child and how a smart grandmother imparts her wisdom. Very nicely done, with character development, a "conflict" (unresolved hunger), as well as its resolution and excellent use of action and dialogue. (However, be sure to read our article, How to Write Dialogue in Fiction to learn the correct format.)

Thank you for sharing your enjoyable creative nonfiction story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.