This is quite an imaginative story, @gabmr! You really packed a lot of action in. Thanks for submitting to The Ink Well's fiction contest.

One thing I wanted to mention is that it's really important not to pull images from just anywhere you find them on the Internet. Most images are copyright protected. So please be sure to use images under creative commons licenses, like Pixabay, Pexels, Unsplash and Wikimedia Commons.