Welcome to The Ink Well, @emeka002. You have a nice storytelling style for sci fi.

A few notes for you:

1. Your images are unfortunately copyrighted images and must be replaced. We require writers to use copyright-free images. (Be sure to read our community rules at the top of our home page, or you can read them here.) You can replace your images with pictures from license free sites like Pixabay, Unsplash or Pexels.
2. Be sure to have a look around our community. We have some great resources for our writing community, including a catalog of fiction writing tips. In particular I always recommend Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides tips for using Google Docs to draft your content. It will highlight errors and it makes it very easy to fix them.

Thanks for posting in The Ink Well. We are here to help writers learn and enjoy the craft of fiction writing.