I enjoyed your imaginative tale, populate with mermen and mermaids, @ddn688, especially the hopeful ending. I'm guessing English isn't your first language, so I was curious if you have ever read our article titled Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them. It's a great tool!

Your writing is good. There are just a few things here and there. For example, the last line:

Truly, a war can be fourth without battling each other.

It should be: Truly, a war can be fought without battling each other. That's something that would appear in Google docs. Just a suggestion, if you would like to try it. It's free!