I enjoyed this story, @blackalbino1. I was charmed by the two old ladies, especially Anne.

I was wondering about this sentence, which I couldn't quite understand:

This act-of-wickedness standing here in human form seizes to be a relative I’d give my acknowledgment.

Do you mean "ceases to be a relative"?

We have a great article that might help you, titled Help for the Grammatically Challenged. It provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.

Keep writing!