I enjoyed your story, @blackalbino1. I hope you're open to feedback! One thing you might want to consider is adding action and dialog to your stories. When a story is all "narrative" (prose) it is like a summary of a story, instead of storytelling. The concept is called "show, don't tell," and we have an article about it in our catalog of fiction writing tips.
Here's an example. This is and example of "telling" because there are no details. Instead of writing the story in action, it is a summary of the action:
On Pella’s 18th birthday, her parents made their confession to her. While Pella was growing, she experienced strange things happen to her. She had that superficial strength she didn’t understand.
Instead, you could show this with action, dialog and interesting details. I'll just make something up as an example:
The day Pella turned 18, she watched her parents as they decorated her cake. Her father kept glancing at her, and her mother had a strange glow about her, as if she was harboring some kind of secret.
"Alright, you two," she said. "What is going on?"
Her parents exchanged another glance, and a smile.
"We have decided to tell you the truth about your past," her mother said.
Her father nodded. "It might seem hard to believe, but we received help from someone in a space ship. He provided a remedy that helped you come into the world safe and sound."
"What? Are you making this up?"
They shook their heads.
Pella laughed. "Is that why I'm so much stronger than everyone else?"
When they nodded, she picked them both up at the same time, and held them in the air in a tight hug. "At last, I know why I am like this!"
So, I hope that is helpful! Adding dialog and action is an important part of good storytelling. You can find some more information in our article, Action, Dialog and Narrative: The Dynamic Trio.
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