RE: RE: Zahra
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RE: Zahra

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I enjoyed your story, bettyhandayani@bettyhandayani. My heart goes out to Ara for how she was treated by the other students!

When reading stories that have a "moral," I always recommend that writers consider leaving that out. That would allow your readers to decide for themselves what to think about the story. The analogy I like to use is watching a movie. You wouldn't want the movie director to come tell you the point of the movie at the end, right? 😄