I love it when a story says so much so succinctly — a story that invites us to examine our own lives, our choices, and whether we are using our time well, wisely, and with a conscience. Your story put all of these thoughts in my head, along with "what if some supernatural being was able to show me my most egregious acts in life, as if in a YouTube movie trailer?" And it made me think of second chances, and the opportunity to get things right, even if we have made poor choices or regretful decisions. I love the world you built in this story. It felt very real. It also made me want to take all of the three strikes babies home and surround them with love and hope and joy. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing with us, @agmoore.