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Well done, @agmoore. You stayed perfectly within the mind and thoughts of the character. I kept thinking: Chicken or human? Hatching or birthing? Tell me! I must know!
Beautifully done. It's so easy for the author to step in, but like an excellent actor who not only prepares for his character but becomes him, you did not step out of your character's point of view for a second!
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