I really enjoyed this story, @deraaa. The drama and conversation between two people is always interesting. You did such a nice job of creating a romantic tension! Well done! I have a few tips for you.

I'm so glad it's beneficial for you, @marynn. Happy writing!

Wonderful to hear. Yes, we are all developing our skills, continually.

I really enjoyed your story, @sapphireissafy. You have a unique and compelling writing style. I was so curious about Cly and what her lifestyle might be like, if she is part human, part mermaid. You could

This is so lovely, lyrical and spellbinding, @cajiro. Wow! Well done!

This story is a lot of fun, @elentiyaroberts. You did a nice job of creating some mystery and suspense. I definitely did not expect that ending!

It sounds like you had a very busy year, with some ups and downs. Yes, it was a big year for weddings. So many people had postponed their weddings during Covid. I found this so charming: Whispers, I love

I really like your goal to convert a bus into a travel van for accommodations while you go touring, @fantom22. I have traveled in such a vehicle and it's a great way to travel. 4.Although I do not regret

Oh my, @kemmyb. This is riveting. It's funny because normally I find descriptions of the lives of the rich and famous uninteresting. (Maybe I'm just jealous!) But I really loved reading about this couple.

Thank you, @plantpoweronhive!

Great to hear that you'll benefit from this info, @kei2! I love your writing. We are always improving, though, right?

I'm so glad it's helpful, @deraaa. And I'm not surprised you've spent several hours reading the different resources about dialogue. It really is a rich topic for writers, and a skill to develop over time.

I do hope so, @agmoore. I know it's something many of our community members struggle with!

Im so glad you'll find it useful, @popurri!

He was the master of simple yet effective writing. And that story is certainly a tour de force!

Thank you, @arduilcelebren. I hope its a resource that helps elevate your writing. Have fun!

Great to hear. Happy writing, @macjulez.

I hope you find it helpful, @elentiyaroberts.

It does not appear the humans have a chance at surviving this experience. Hopefully Bren and the others have a way to get out of there fast, before the water runs out!

Aw, this is so beautiful and heartbreaking. Great to see that you're still here on Hive even though you keep threatening to leave, @raj808! Happy Holidays and Happy New Year, my friend.