Hello, @theinkwell

Thanks for the recommendation. However, I must clarify that the vague and very open denouement is intentional. I wanted to experiment in my narrative a little bit the style (of his beginnings within the storytelling) of the Japanese Mukurami. Of course, to do it in micro-stories (less than a thousand words) is very difficult. But I think literature is all about exploring and challenging the limits. So, your feedback on this occasion is precious to me. No doubt, I must keep working on developing my own style and any criticism is welcome.

Greetings