Hello, 
A very interesting topic that captivated my attention throughout the story. Undoubtedly, Amanda, is a key character in the plot and exemplifies very well the tales of urban legends.
Yes, I think your story deals with a reality tinged with the fantastic, that many people suffer beyond fiction, and that confronts the sanity of the majority.
Greetings.
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