Hello, @litguru

I liked the way you intertwined the narrative with the description. One can see the holographs and even smell the atmosphere. Also, the daydreams fit perfectly into the flow of the story. As well as showing, the zeitgeist of the space race.

I enjoyed it from beginning to end. Many perspectives in a few words of the everyday and philosophical nuances of existentialism through the evolution of a person's life.

Great writing!