RE: RE: Journey to the present | Viaje al presente (ENG-SPA)
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RE: Journey to the present | Viaje al presente (ENG-SPA)

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I can't imagine what it must have been like for him to feel dislocated in time and space, uprooted, and like a stranger among his own.

janaveda@janaveda, I have to say, I was really impressed with the way you described Tokyo. The characters, pictograms, vibrant colors, and those test glasses that served as a real-time universal translator? That's some seriously cool technology.

But I have to admit, I was a bit confused when Wiliam started talking about a lump falling on him and transporting him to a formless place where colors converged in endless extremes. And then he met Tanaka, who seemed to know a lot about time and space.

All in all, I really enjoyed reading your story. It's thought-provoking, engaging, and full of surprises. Also, I appreciate the way you blended science and spirituality to create a unique and compelling story. Well done.

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