Poetry Trial| Call it CONFUCIUS

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So i decided to try my head on a few poetry works. Herr goes....

Kiss from a rose
Lips of the gods
With sensual appeal
You give me sores
A bleeding heart with thorns
Like hated love with worms
For your thoughts my soul burns
What could be worse?
The death of loved ones
Or alienation of dear ones
Forgive my rambling thoughts
Disoriented in all sorts

To be continued.....
Disclaimer: if you truely understand this "thing", ya not normal.

Corrections and advice will be appreciated!

Poetry Trial| Call it CONFUCIUS | Ecency