It's the feedback hour

My past two posts have been "creative writing" posts, one about the past,present and future and the memories we gain, cherish and the ones we lock away.

The second one about a war veteran remembering the woes of his past.

This post is made to gain knowledge, knowledge about how some of you fellow steemer's think.
And for me to be able to do that i will need you, the reader to comment below.
If you could take a quick second to glance over these two posts:

https://steemit.com/writing/@harand/the-old-mans-cottage

https://steemit.com/writing/@harand/the-book-you-keep-within

And throw in some feedback it would be much appreciated.

I try to comment usefully on posts i find interesting, mostly because the poster replies and a dialogue is started.

This way you build bridges, you find good writers and nice people engaging in your content and you engage in theirs. Comments also helps us by guiding the writer in future directions.

So now i'm pressing the button awaiting knowledge about what i do not know.