Greetings, @emeka002!

You have written a very imaginative, action-packed story. Kai has lived through a legendary battle and achieved his goal.

Perhaps you are just starting out in writing and you have been carried away by emotion, maybe that's why your writing is a bit rushed and confusing.

If you want to learn to write, you need to give importance to both the theme and actions as well as how you present them to the reader.

The best way to learn to write is to read others.
Stop at the details: describing the different actions and the setting, presenting the dialogues in the right way, managing the tension in the writing, etc.

I see you are new to the platform. Be welcome.

You might want to take some time to read the writing aids on our home page, as well as the rules of our community.We want to see original writing, like yours, and we want to see you grow as a writer.
Keep writing.