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RE: Cat Spirit

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In this text you elaborate an interesting story, cryptofi@cryptofi .

You dare to give more writing space to your imagination and make the reader stay with you, waiting to see how you solve the cat's disappearance: is he gone completely or does he still need the closeness of the person who loved him?

I like how you manage the exercise of putting yourself in Prisca's thoughts:

All she knows is that she keeps hearing the sound of the cat in other rooms. She knows what she heard.

Continue with your writing exercises.

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