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In this text you elaborate an interesting story, @cryptofi .
You dare to give more writing space to your imagination and make the reader stay with you, waiting to see how you solve the cat's disappearance: is he gone completely or does he still need the closeness of the person who loved him?
I like how you manage the exercise of putting yourself in Prisca's thoughts:
All she knows is that she keeps hearing the sound of the cat in other rooms. She knows what she heard.
Continue with your writing exercises.
RE: Cat Spirit