This story was really good @litguru.

You know how to get the reader hooked in and mesmerized with paragraphs like this one:

Elara monitored the patterns, watching the activation of his pons, transmitting electrobiochemical signals that collided on his cerebral cortex in a fragmentary synthesis of images and memories transformed into dreams; a sensory collision of two activated souls copied and pasted at will on the page and woven into one shared narrative of random sentences.

I think this would make a great movie. The fabric of reality becoming interwoven into the dream of Zak and Dr. Elara.

Really cool generative art too, it fits the story well.