heh... thanks for sharing on #pypt.

The change of style in writing was quite obvious there :D

One thing I'd say is: Make shorter sentences and use more punctuation. I found it a bit confusing to digest the statements in your own part as compared to @dreemsteem's intro. While your part did, for the lack of sentence structure, convey some of the action and emotion of the intense and frightening encounter, I did find it a bit hard to follow.