Hello guys so I want to become a better writer as you know I’m a terrible writer my grammar, structuring all the techniques are non existent but after some kind words an advice from the legend herself the one and only 
It was late in the afternoon, just before the light of day started to change. I had been sitting on the couch looking for something to do, and found myself reading silly stories on the internet.
Somehow, I began clicking on stories that were suspenseful. It was fun, but I lost track of time. By the time, I looked up, the sun had set and I could barely see the trees outside.
I started to feel uncomfortable, like someone was watching me. Chills started to creep up my back as I began tentatively looking into the shadows beyond my window.
Just then....
SO THAT WAS ALL HER SHE STARTED IT OFF FOR ME
So here’s my part...
Just then I hear banging at the front door before I even move I hear more banging this time from the back door. I scramble looking for a place to hide I jump down to the floor underneath the window the banging still continuing.
now I can here a scream as the seconds go by the louder it gets crawl to the telephone I quickly dial 911 as as the operator picks up I get a static noise then silence all the power in my house has gone out before I have time to turn around the door falls from its frame.
a tall man with eyes as red as fresh blood enters and just stares at me he doesn’t say a word just stares at me and slowly he starts to smile and the more I stare the bigger he smiles.
I run to the back door his smile drops he runs at me I opened the back door just in time but I was pushed back by another tall Man I fell and hit my head I felt extremely dizzy.
I was being carried by them both towards a van when I here a siren they drop me and run for it but I manage to grab one mans leg and delayed him for a few seconds that was enough for the cops to get him and take him down as I am side by the am officer to stand up the man said nothing didn’t even resist being arrested just stared at me like I was lifeless they took him away but his eyes felt like they never went after the officer drove away I felt huge relief I felt safe.
AND THATS MY PART OF THE STORY
Was is bad? Most definitely
Was it good? Nope
Why did I do it ? Because
Will I do this again ? Absolutely she will make me 🤣
Thank you so much for reading I’d love to hear your guys feedback so do give some all feedback is welcome as long as it’s HONEST