"running water" a five minute freewrite

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This is the freewrite challenge. I am using mariannewest@mariannewest’s #freewrite prompt to write this piece (https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-667-5-minute-freewrite-sunday-prompt-running-water)

Today’s prompt is:

running water

This is part Seventy Three of my current freewrite series - I’m calling it RatsNest for now - (posted daily Monday - Saturday).
You can find parts one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten, eleven, twelve, thirteen, fourteen, fifteen, sixteen, seventeen, eighteen, nineteen, twenty, twenty one, twenty two, twenty three, twenty four, twenty five, Twenty Six,Twenty Seven, twenty eight, Twenty nine, Thirty, Thirty One, Thirty Two, Thirty Three, Thirty Four, Thirty Five, Thirty Six, Thirty Seven, Thirty Eight, Thirty Nine, Forty, Forty One, Forty Two, Forty Three, Fory Four, Forty Five, Forty Six, Forty Seven, Forty Eight, Forty Nine, Fifty, Fifty One, Fifty Two, Fifty Three, Fifty Four, Fifty Five, Fifty Six, Fifty Seven, Fifty Eight, Fifty Nine, Sixty, Sixty one, Sixty Two, Sixty Three, Sixty Four, Sixty Five, Sixty Six, Sixty Seven, Sixty Eight, Sixty Nine, Seventy, Seventy One, Seventy two if you are interested

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"Oh for heaven's sake," the rat said. It leapt on to Faver's shoulder and it was enough of a shock for Faver to stop crying and stand up. The rat clung on to Faver's shirt.

"Get off me!"

"I will not! We have things to do. You need to pull yourself together, all this running water," the rat gestured to the streams of tears that had run down Faver's cheeks. "Is not helping anyone. There are more important things at stake!"

Faver grabbed hold of the rat and tried to remove him from his shoulder. The rat bit him and Faver let go. The rat jumped down and ran over to Faver's front door.

"Enough of this nonsense," he said. He pressed a small-clawed paw to the door and to Faver's amazement there was a click and the door swung open. "Get inside. Have a cup of tea, or whatever it is you need to get a grip and let's talk about the future."

Faver walked over to the door stepped into his house and slammed the door quickly before the rat could follow him inside.

"That won't work, you know," a voice said from behind him.
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As usual, I started with the freewrite prompt and used themostdangerouswritingapp.com to write the first five minutes (and then popped it into google docs to check for errors and tidy it up a bit):

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