This is the freewrite challenge. I am using @mariannewest’s #freewrite prompt to write this piece (https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-648-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-manipulation)
Today’s prompt is:
This is part Fifty Seven of my current freewrite series - I’m calling it RatsNest for now - (posted daily Monday - Saturday).
You can find parts one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten, eleven, twelve, thirteen, fourteen, fifteen, sixteen, seventeen, eighteen, nineteen, twenty, twenty one, twenty two, twenty three, twenty four, twenty five, Twenty Six,Twenty Seven, twenty eight, Twenty nine, Thirty, Thirty One, Thirty Two, Thirty Three, Thirty Four, Thirty Five, Thirty Six, Thirty Seven, Thirty Eight, Thirty Nine, Forty, Forty One, Forty Two, Forty Three, Fory Four, Forty Five, Forty Six, Forty Seven, Forty Eight, Forty Nine, Fifty, Fifty One, Fifty Two, Fifty Three, Fifty Four, Fifty Five, Fifty Six if you are interested
As Magenta settled down onto the sofa she noticed her right buttock of her trousers was stuck to it. There was something sticky and unpleasant she was sitting in. She tried not to think about it.
She watched as the small boy, she had thought of as the Trot-creature, pulled himself up onto a chair opposite her and patted his knee. The small ugly dog jumped up and began waggling its tail.
Magenta realised her benevolent dragon was not with her. How had he managed to separate her from her Power? In her own mind? Her anxiety began to take control. She did not like this manipulation. After all, if anyone was doing the manipulating it should be her.
"Right," Personal Responsibility said. "As I said, we need to talk. You are rather interfering in our plans."
Our plans?
"We have been in control of this place for some time and we do not want you messing things up."
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As usual, I started with the freewrite prompt and used themostdangerouswritingapp.com to write the first five minutes (and then popped it into google docs to check for errors and tidy it up a bit):
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The NEW @SteemFiction book, has been published! Currently available on Amazon for the Kindle it is now available as a paperback too!
Check out the trailer for the book!
I have a story in it called The Still Blood-Soaked Path
A YouTube documentary film-maker visits a remote island to investigate the horrific murder of a young woman, and the subsequent suicide of her killer almost thirty years ago. But was the young lover really responsible for the brutal slaying of his girlfriend? And if not who was?
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I had a comment left on one of my freewrites and I have to say, it made my day!
“Hey I got the book and want to tell you how much I enjoyed your story! Loved the twist at the end… you somehow nearly always manage to produce an unexpected twist... Love the care you take with your characters, intertwining them.” @owasco
If you want a taster of what is in the book, the video below shows me reading the first 900 words, or so, of my story, The Tell-Tale Dead
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