"hippo" a five minute freewrite

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This is the freewrite challenge. I am using mariannewest@mariannewest’s #freewrite prompt to write this piece (https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-606-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-hippo)

Today’s prompt is:

hippo

This is part twenty two of my current freewrite series - I’m calling it RatsNest for now - (posted daily Monday - Saturday).

You can find parts one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten, eleven, twelve, thirteen, fourteen, fifteen, sixteen, seventeen, eighteen, [nineteen@(https://steemit.com/freewritehouse/@felt.buzz/caducity-a-five-minute-freewrite-gsqpjuwn), twenty, twenty one if you are interested

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She was woken by screams. She sat upright in the bed, sweat beading on her body, her hand gripping the gun she always kept beside her when she slept. She listened carefully, blocking out the sound of her breathing and the thump-thump-thump of her heart. She could hear nothing.

Nothing unusual anyway.

Outside, in the streets below her apartment, she could hear men laughing and the occasional shout. People returning to their homes before the curfew. Inside there was nothing. She frowned. Had she dreamed of the screams? Normally, she did not dream. Or if she did she never remembered them. She always awoke clear-headed, rested and relaxed.

The woman who currently called herself Annie climbed out of the bed and took a shower, the gun resting on the edge of the sink within reach. As the water washed the sweat from her body she tried to remember what she had been dreaming of. Who had screamed? Was it her?

Or one of the others?

In another life, her first she supposed, her father had taken her to a zoo. In a cage, she had seen a large beast screaming as a zookeeper had attempted to approach it.

"That's a hippo," her father had said.

"Why is it screaming, father?"

Her father had shrugged. "Does it matter?"

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As usual, I started with the freewrite prompt and used themostdangerouswritingapp.com to write the first five minutes (and then popped it into google docs to check for errors and tidy it up a bit):

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