"awry" a five minute freewrite

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This is the freewrite challenge. I am using mariannewest@mariannewest’s #freewrite prompt to write this piece (https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-640-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-awry)

Today’s prompt is:

awry

This is part Fifty of my current freewrite series - I’m calling it RatsNest for now - (posted daily Monday - Saturday).
You can find parts one, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten, eleven, twelve, thirteen, fourteen, fifteen, sixteen, seventeen, eighteen, nineteen, twenty, twenty one, twenty two, twenty three, twenty four, twenty five, Twenty Six,Twenty Seven, twenty eight, Twenty nine, Thirty, Thirty One, Thirty Two, Thirty Three, Thirty Four, Thirty Five, Thirty Six, Thirty Seven, Thirty Eight, Thirty Nine, Forty, Forty One, Forty Two, Forty Three, Fory Four, Forty Five, Forty Six, Forty Seven, Forty Eight, Forty Nine if you are interested

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The old man laughed and Faver turned his back on him. He fumbled with his phone. Why wouldn't it unlock his house? He tried realigning it.

"Something gone awry, old chap?" the old man said.

Faver glanced over his shoulder. The old man was still on the ground, but he was smiling up at Faver as though he was the happiest person in the world.

"They've taken everything from you," the old man said. "You're job, your Rating, and now your home. You are lost." With a grunt he pushed himself up onto his feet. "I can help you find your way home if you like." He gave Faver a little wave and turned away and began to totter down the road.

Faver glanced at the screen of his phone: Access DENIED it read. The old man was right. He had been stripped of his entire life. Without the correct Rating he would be refused access to everything.

He banged on the door. It was out of pure frustration. He knew there was no one inside to help him.

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As usual, I started with the freewrite prompt and used themostdangerouswritingapp.com to write the first five minutes (and then popped it into google docs to check for errors and tidy it up a bit):
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