@kingsleymark I never felt like you were a new writer, you put together the scenes very well, you portrayed the characters of Nancy and Richard very well. What a happy coincidence that the victim woman used to work in the same office. And the culprit of the unintentional crime was his boss. The biggest and heart touching coincidence is that both his wife and child were dead, what would be the use of these combinations. He probably wouldn't have been able to do justice to Nancy if his wife and child were alive.
Overall very interesting subject and narration. I liked it. But the community will judge it from their point of view.