@cool08 How deeply did you analyze that, it is established that you are a good writer, as I know about myself, it is possible that some spelling may be wrong or there may be a difference of tense, anyway every country Citizens may have a different writing style, their slang, their limitations, their environment, their systems, their preferences, their perspectives, but still we want to reach our feelings through these short stories and possibly have been reaching them.
I would warmly welcome you if you would like to tell me about my shortcomings.
There is a saying in our country that the one who criticizes us should be given a room in the courtyard of our house.