Είναι όντως σπάνιο, έχω δει 2-3 φορές στην Αθήνα, αλλά πραγματικά όσο σπάνιο είναι εδώ, άλλο τόσο δεν είναι στο μισό πλανήτη :D

This is officially the first time in this platform I enjoyed a poem.

I will have success if you teach me spanish :P

Extra inspired :P

At last a good poem in here.

I think first of all you know what it means to work on a poem. I like the theme/atmosphere of a dance. You used many "elements" [the moon, the dancing, wind/earth, ..] and maybe they need to

I share these thoughts and it's a good thing you write down everything to the detail. It does sound more like a diary, a bit of a pray and not really a poem.

A poem might be complicated, might hide things on purpose but this one looks like you are just confused. "it provokes my delirium" is an excellent line and there is nothing else. You obviously

The pictures only lessen the poem. I would use none or one. It does sound like a diary at some point instead of a poem. I like your theme though [liking people while hating to be around them].

STOP

It is good. I am thinking "go" or "where will [..] go" is a weak concept somehow, doesn't sound so great as the rest. Good poem.

I love this big baby.

The least white thing in the picture is the "White tower" αδελφέ :D

I don't know these people, but I share their vision and their voices sound familiar to the unfamiliar. I'm not into happy birthdays but that was a great reason to write a song. Thanks for singing it to