:) HaHa, yes, Egos can be very ape-like but also impressively being calmed down, as I wanted to show with my story.
Just curious, why did you choose letters of the alphabet instead of actual names?
I startet out just with letters as I was concentrating on the overall story telling and names got in my way, so to speak. I was too lazy then to go back and think of them so I just left them like I had put them first. But it's good to have received critique because it's too confusing and so I changed it meanwhile.
Also, I even confused myself and got the letters wrongly placed. So it was good that people pointed it out.
The story has authentic parts but overall its fictional and so are the names. Sam already was asking me and you experienced women have a good eye for it. ;)
RE: THE STORY OF A MAN PUTTING HIS EGO ASIDE