From crap to not so crap -original artwork progression

** This is an attempt to art from a while ago **
Name:Aularia
Height:5'3
Weight : 111
Eye color:Purple
This is Aularia, she is a princess from the aquatic world of Geoiur. Aularia's race are renowned for their sea silk gowns and peaceful society. They are able to give a debilitating shock when frightening and love eating sushi.

This is my attempt to revisit this character and try to make a better version of it
So, what do you think? Improvement or no.
This was a free hand colored pencil and pen drawing. All original artwork by me.