Blondie - waitress at a tavern

Hi

Okay, I admit, I don't like this drawing of mine at all. This character is the NPC that appears in dnd. Blondie is a waitress at a tavern. Since there is a ghost in the concept of the in tavern , that's why she wears white. While I was making this drawing, I tried to pay attention to the line thicknesses, but I couldn't realize how I lost the dimensions of the character while obsessing about the line until the work was done :/

If I'm going to use such hard shadows, I draw the lines clean after the sketch. After drawing the line, I paint in black and white and mask the layers and switch to color painting.

I used Photoshop 2020 for this drawing. But I could draw with the same effect with any vector program.

Thank You