Thank you for the constructive criticism, and I also notice many errors looking back at my posts too. Even since you have posted this I have noticed and corrected various errors (there are likely a few I'm not seeing). I do it a bit rushed, I usually don't have time to really edit them the way I want until a week or too later due to my day job. Or I don't even necessarily have the time to put everything the way I would like in one go. if you have been checking previous posts you'll notice almost all of them have various edits over time. I appreciate any attention to grammar errors, and your criticism. I tried painting it this time, my markers have run dry. I am not the best painter and definitely appreciate any input. If anything jumps out to you you can always message me in discord or here. I definitely appreciate the time and effort you put in to this reply. I am certain you are a better artist than I regardless of inspiration. As you no doubt can tell, I don't draft due to time constraints. And I must admit it lowers the quality of my work. I just want to put something out there every week for all of you, even if it has a few errors. Thanks so much. And definitely check back on the stories in about a week, I've fixed various errors but haven't gone over every story yet. I have a small vacation from work and will finally have time to go over everything, if you want to assist in proofreading just DM me. No comment is too critical, it's what the comment button is there for. I'm just honored you have actually read it. Most people don't read the stories aside from me coming back to edit them when I have time.