I was planning on dm'ing you this answer, but when I couldn't upvote I realised how late I am. The tension as thick as a gelatinous cube. And I think that Cynlock would be in the green splinter, and his grandfather Hu'Ra'Kal would be in the red or maybe black splinter, giving two options because of your mention of his sinister plans.
I hope I'm not being too critical here, but I have noticed a good number of spelling and grammar errors in your stories, if you would like an assist with your future additions to the storyline I'd be happy to help. As for your pictures, again not meaning to be too critical but rather constructive, I'd thought of two things that might help you improve, granted they may not be feasible for you with where you are in life.
1: A little more time to even things out and make them more symmetrical when they should be, and/or a different method of applying color to even out and help with symmetry ie: instead of using tip of marker when filling in larger areas tip it on side so you're using the side of the tip which covers a wider area in the same stroke.
2: Make a quick rough sketch/outline which you can use to layout your ideas before making them more finalized and permanent, which you can either draw over the top adding a layer to your art, or use as a template or guide and continue your picture on a second paper.

Thanks again for your time and imagination in making this story and art, I look forward to the next installment. And I hope my input is helpful, it seems you have more inspiration than I do which is my biggest hangup as an artist.