今天给小宝贝辅导作文。现在已经是期末了，再过几天就放假了，老师也没有布置什么作业。总的来说，小宝贝的语文成绩不算很理想。虽然我觉得一个很大的原因是现在的教育太卷了。不过也只有想办法适应小宝贝到一起也很配合，答应每隔一两天就写一篇作文练笔。今天的作文是我喜欢的夏天。摘抄如下。
夏天是从立夏到立秋的第二个季节夏天的脾气有时。很暴躁，时不时天就暗了下来，经常下雷雨和暴雨。夏天还非常热，我们都穿上短袖还是满头大汗，穿短袖还容易被蚊子咬。一到蚊子，我就来给大家说几个生活小知识一般蚊子所在的温度大于40度，蚊子就飞不动了，还有平常都是词文字吸人写公文字，是吃花粉的。夏天的水果多有苹果，橘子，桃子，李子，杏子，杨梅，杨桃等等。水果不仅多，蔬菜也很多，主要以瓜菜为主，有南瓜西瓜，冬瓜丝瓜笋瓜黄瓜，夏天水也很多水多自然鱼儿也多，所以夏天吃鱼也是个不错的选择。蚊子很喜欢又黑又潮的地方，所以夏天蚊虫多，自然树叶长得茂盛。提到虫我就想起一种。要人命的重。你问是什么？对了就是蜱虫大蜱虫比蜱虫太恐怖了，我喜欢夏天，但是千万不要去草丛里，小心被虫子叮咬。
怎么说呢，我觉得这篇文章还写的可以营销宝贝的水平来说。读起来还蛮有意思的，但是以教育考试的水平来衡量，那问题就比较多了，首先要题目的联系不是那么紧，题目叫我喜欢的夏天自然要多写，夏天让自己喜欢的方面，而他却有很大的篇幅在讲让人讨厌的蚊虫。于是我提了一些建议，比如增加夏天好玩的一方面的内容，将蚊虫的内容压缩一下，放到文章的后面。结尾也不要提醒大家注重蚊虫叮咬，也要总结一下夏天给我们带来的快乐。
按照我的建议，小宝贝又重写了一遍。
夏天是从立夏到立秋，是全年的第2个季节，夏天的脾气有时很暴躁，经常下雷雨暴雨，是不是天上就会下起雨来那天。让我最高兴的事情就是放暑假了。暑假会让我变得更放松，还可以出远门见识。去植物园可以了解各种各样的植物大黄花，紫丁香，茉莉花。康乃馨，有杨树柳树，苹果树，桃树。梧桐树。有345叶草了。去科技馆可以了解知识有多米诺骨牌会飞的海洋球等等，还可以尽情的玩水。但是一定要注意安全。
夏天的水果很多。有桃子，李子，杏子，杨梅等蔬菜也多，南瓜，冬瓜丝瓜瓜类为主，夏天水多月多可以吃鱼了。
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Tutoring the little baby essay today. It's the end of the semester now, and the holiday will be in a few days, and the teacher hasn't assigned any homework. In general, the baby's language score is not very good. Although I think a big reason is that education is too volatile nowadays. But I only have to find a way to adapt to the little baby to be very cooperative, and I promise to write an essay every day or two to practice writing. Today's essay is my favorite summer. An excerpt from the following is provided.
Summer is the second season from the beginning of summer to the beginning of autumn, and there are times of temper in summer. Very irritable, every now and then it gets dark, and there are frequent thunderstorms and torrential rains. Summer is still very hot, we all wear short sleeves or sweat profusely, wearing short sleeves and easy to be bitten by mosquitoes. As soon as mosquitoes arrive, I will tell you a few life tips, generally the temperature of mosquitoes is greater than 40 degrees, mosquitoes will not be able to fly, and usually words and words attract people to write public characters, which are pollen. In summer, there are many fruits such as apples, oranges, peaches, plums, apricots, bayberry, star fruit, etc. There are not only many fruits, but also a lot of vegetables, mainly melons and vegetables, such as pumpkin and watermelon, winter melon, loofah, bamboo shoots, cucumber, and there is a lot of water in summer, and there are naturally many fish, so it is also a good choice to eat fish in summer. Mosquitoes love dark and tidal places, so there are many mosquitoes in summer, and naturally the leaves grow luxuriantly. When I think of insects, I think of one. It costs human life. What's that, you ask? By the way, the big tick is too scary than the tick, I like summer, but don't go to the grass, be careful of being bitten by bugs.
How to say it, I think this article is also written to market the level of the baby. It's quite interesting to read, but measured by the level of the educational exam, there are more questions, first of all, the connection of the topic is not so tight, the topic is called the summer I like, I naturally have to write more, and the summer makes me like the aspects, and he has a lot of space to talk about annoying mosquitoes. So I made some suggestions, such as adding the fun aspect of summer, and condensing the content of mosquitoes and putting it at the end of the article. At the end, don't remind everyone to pay attention to mosquito bites, but also summarize the happiness that summer brings us.
Following my suggestion, the little darling rewrote it again.
Summer is the second season of the year from the beginning of summer to the beginning of autumn, and the temper of summer is sometimes very irritable, and there are often thunderstorms and torrential rains, and it will not rain in the sky on the day. The thing that makes me happiest is the summer vacation. Summer vacation will make me more relaxed and I can go out and see things. Go to the botanical garden to learn about a wide variety of plants, rhubarb, lilac, jasmine. Carnations, poplars, willows, apple trees, peach trees. Sycamore trees. There are 345 leaves of grass left. Go to the science and technology museum to learn about dominoes, flying ocean balls, etc., and you can also play in the water to your heart's content. But be sure to stay safe.
There are many fruits in the summer. There are many vegetables such as peaches, plums, apricots, bayberry, pumpkin, winter melon, loofah, and melon, and you can eat fish for many months in summer.
