RE: RE: Minotaur To The Rescue, a freewrite
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RE: Minotaur To The Rescue, a freewrite

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When all is lost, she starts singing Amazing Grace.
This detail!
"I'm gonna die," and I fall back on this old church hymn ("that saved a wretch like me").
And this:
She abandoned her craft, a boat from her childhood, and walked to shore, renewed.

Somehow, you convey a lot of meaning in these very few words.
I'm still trying to unpack it.
This boat *from her childhood has failed her (leaking, sinking) - it upheld her into her old age, and now she abandons it and walks, renewed, to the shore, to safety.

Sooo much to unpack.
Did I mention this is #epic?

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