RE: RE: Stavros, a Freewrite
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RE: Stavros, a Freewrite

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It is a GREAT opening sentence for a story.
I'm still curious about this freedom fighter. I have visions of the guy with a handful of TNT, a miner of Astoria (Asturia?) during the Spanish Civil War...

He BROKE the bottle, as opposed to just breaking into it (opening it)?

Another great sentence: "I could smell it loud and clear."

Maybe it'll be a poem, at this rate.

@carolkean: It is a GREAT | Ecency