welcome to hive. im glad you made it. a few things to share. persistence and resilience is key here. authentically engaging through comments is a an effective way to show other hiveans who you are. go read others posts and give your true thoughts about that post. that is a great way to meet people

we have bot farms and people trying to syphon money out of the hive ecosystem, so as you first arrive it is important to not appear as one of these extractor only accounts. A way you can show the community you are a real person is to take a selfie with a paper and hand written todays date and your username. im not saying it obligated. but it can be helpful.
your post is an inspirational phrase. there is nothing wrong with it. but a bot could have generated it easily. nothing in the post shares about you personally, nothing of your personal character. what makes you tick. i encourage you to share about your personal authentic self. something that shows you to be a real human and not just some bot trying to leech from the hive community. be real, be you and people will eventual recognize that
Good luck finding your feet!