Thanks @riverflows..I was hoping someone would notice the hidden sequel which I was planning to post in a different community. I just needed to know that the story was legit. Thanks for the support 🥰

Thanks I appreciate..

Your right @theinkwell I guess I was scared of messing up what i thought was a perfect narrative.... I'll do better

Change is hard but I'm glad Doris fought hard to overcome

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I envy your ability to write such a fascinating fantasy story.. your description of events is absolutely intriguing... I love it.

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