The doors burst open as a young woman wearing blue jeans and a black leather jacket flies out onto the asphalt. Lying on the ground she shoots a look at the doors she just crashed through, noticing a crack in the glass that explains the pain on the side of her head.
Fumbling around in her pocket, the fear on her face eases when she finds what she's looking for: a black disc seven centimetres in diameter that resembles a hockey puck in both shape an appearance, lying several metres away.
Ade was right, I shouldn't have come alone, she thinks, as the door that put the bump on her head is pulled effortlessly off its hinges. Eyes-wide open she stares at the tall metallic shape in the doorway. A class-11 would never survive that. What the....
Her thoughts are cut short as it begins moving towards her. Scrambling to her feet she moves awkwardly to where the disc lies, stumbling as she reaches down to pick it up. Blood drips from her head onto the disc, collecting in a pool on its concave surface. Her hands shaking, she glances back to find the machine right behind her. As it reaches for her, she takes a deep breath and pushes her thumb hard into the indentation on the disc - the world around her fades as a bright white light bleeds into existence.
* * * * *
"Ally is back; she's hurt!", screamed Ade, his voice booming off the cavern walls.
Suffering from the effects of transportation, and feeling pain in places she hadn't noticed while running for her life, she turned to where she thought Ade was standing; footsteps came rushing into the chamber, accompanied by busy voices.
"They've upgraded the enforcers", she said, staring off into the distance, still suffering from the temporary blindness caused by jumping without a visor.
"What were you thinking, Ally? Look at you! You can't...", he moved to the side the let the medics put fixers on the wounds, "...run off on a one man--", before he could get started lecturing her again, she cut him off.
"I did it", she said, closing her eyes and releasing all the tension from her body. "I know which planet they're being held on."
This is my first ever attempt at writing fiction. I'd really appreciate some feedback so I can improve.