An excellent story, very creative, I knew there was something odd about that green car, and you brought it to life in your story. It leaves you wondering where that strange man came from and where his supernatural strength comes from, as well as why he chose those three children, and didn’t forget the last one, the one who, by chance or because of the timing, was spared at that moment. It leaves the ending entirely open to the imagination of whoever reads the story. Thank you for taking part in the community initiative. A big hug!🤗

Excelente historia, muy creativa, yo sabía que ese coche verde tenía algo raro y vos lo hiciste realidad en tu relato. Uno se queda pensando de donde proviene ese hombre extraño y de donde proviene su fuerza sobrenatural, además de porque eligió a esos tres chicos, y no olvidó a la última, la que por casualidad o el horario se salvó en ese momento. Queda todo un final abierto a la imaginación de aquel que lee la historia. Gracias por participar en la iniciativa de la comunidad. Un gran abrazo!🤗

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