RE: RE: 😱 📘 «El Ojo Ciego» (ES/EN)
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RE: 😱 📘 «El Ojo Ciego» (ES/EN)

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Your story is fabulous; it describes a reality I recognise from so many people I know there, and I know what they’re going through. You’ve used that reality to describe something that might be on many people’s minds, because that reality is overwhelming and stressful, because that reality is depressing and tormenting. You’ve turned it into a mystery and a fantasy at the same time, or perhaps into a deep longing felt by those who wish there were a way out, so they could escape and forget it all. Your writing style is exemplary. Thank you so much for being part of the community. A big hug!🤗

Tu relato es fabuloso, describe una realidad que conozco de tantos que conozco allí y sé por lo que están pasando, usaste esa realidad para describir algo que puede estar en la mente de muchas personas, porque esa realidad abruma y estresa, porque esa realidad deprime y atormenta. Lo convertiste en misterio y en fantasía al mismo tiempo, o tal vez en un anhelo profundo de aquellos que quieren que haya una puerta para escapar y olvidarlo todo. Tu forma de redacción es ejemplar. Muchas gracias por estar en la comunidad. Un gran abrazo!🤗


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