RE: RE: theinkwell writing prize | Blood and Bronze
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RE: theinkwell writing prize | Blood and Bronze

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Well done, great read!

I enjoyed how you gave the reader little hints and expanded on them. Starting with 'the morning beverage'. When I read that, there's this tiny question in the back of my mind - why doesn't Ely say 'here's your coffee / tea'? But then when you get to the blood part, I understand why :).

Having the robot be so humanlike, sensual, was a great twist also. Made it a very believable future: one in which AI has developed, but blood is still something that only comes from real human bodies.