Hello @vastrix,
While I admire your objective of instructing women on how to defend themselves, I'm afraid your story itself violates principles expressed in our community Manifesto. We do not curate stories that deal in explicit violence, especially violence against women, children and animals. We also do not curate stories that feature negative stereotypes ('whores', for example).

Thank you for thinking of us when you write creatively. Please acquaint yourself with our Manifesto and our Rules when you write again.