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Hello @ubani1,
Perfect title! I must say, I wanted to finish this story. That is probably the nicest thing anyone can say to an author :) You held my attention and I simply had to know what was going to happen to that boy.
Now, after that great compliment, I do have to ask you how this demon chair is related to the death of the boy's parents? Is it because he caused their deaths that the demon from the chair wants to get him? I was interested enough in the story that I really wanted to know.
Great details, especially in describing his experience in the orphanage. Good job!
RE: THE DEMONIC CHAIR