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Hello @ubani1 ,
It is hard for me to read this story without getting angry. That means, you wrote very effectively. It's a writer's job to elicit emotion from a reader, and you did that.
I hope the beeping means Henry can call for help. Then I hope those three bullies get locked up. That would be a grand ending!
RE: Night in the coffin