RE: RE: Cure is a matter of time
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RE: Cure is a matter of time

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Hello titapach73@titapach73,
First I would like to reinforce the caution issued by raj808@raj808 about the scammer. Never click on a link you don't recognize. Accounts are stolen in this way.

Then, your story! How fast-paced this is. I can tell you see the action before your eyes as you write. There is a strong arc: beginning, middle and end. And the story has a happy ending, a great resolution.

There is some difficulty for the reader in following your narrative because the wording is choppy. This is probably a translation issue. I thank you, though, for posting with Ink Well and I encourage you to keep writing!

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