I have come back from time to time to revisit, rework, and re-edit

The story has the mark of a patient and careful writer. You have lived with this story, which probably why the characters come to life under your guidance.

The ending changed half a dozen times over the past month alone.

My son used to tell me, when I wrote stories (I do so rarely now), that I should leave it alone, that I was teasing the story to death. But you can't say that to a writer. Until it feels 'right' it's not done.

To me, this story is definitely done. But I'm not in your head, I haven't lived with it. I don't think you should follow the man to the children's house. I don't think you should let us see the children as they receive his acceptance. I think what you have done, leaving a message, is perfect.

Sentimental? No. It is full of sentiment. Not the same thing. It took me a while to realize the family was dead, but that's the point, isn't it? The house is pregnant with memory. Now, with the invitation from the two children, perhaps he is ready to start living in the present. At least for Christmas day.

A really well-written story that shows craft.🌺