Welcome @ritachimdi,

In addition to our standard welcome I wanted to make a few personal remarks.

You show a fine sense of structure. That's invaluable in story writing,

Also, your feedback on other stories is meaningful. We very much appreciate that in this community.

First stories in our community receive modest rewards. However, as you craft and publish more in the Inkwell, you should see those rewards increase. Your writing style is good, effective. However, in the beginning of the story there are a few easily editable errors that detract from the overall quality of the piece. Here, for example:

Before coming to the city, I already go a job, but is not paying much

This sentence would obviously read better with a couple of edits, such as:
Before coming to the city, I already had a job, but it was not paying well.

I mention this proofing error so that in the future your blogs (not only in the Inkwell, but across the Hive platform) will shine.

I hope to read more from you in the future. I believe you have a lot to say.

One again, welcome!