Hello @praisingod,

I see that you are relatively new to Hive. I'd like your experience here to be a good one. In this community we are very interested in comments our writers make on other stories. Also, we like the writers to turn in original stories that are about 750 words. We figure it takes that many words, in most cases, for a writer to develop a story. I have posted our official welcome message under your story. This message will help you to acclimate yourself to the community, should you choose to write here again.

I know that when someone joins Hive it feels sometimes as though no one is listening/reading. We do listen/read in the Inkwell, but we do expect writers to become familiar with our culture.

Hive can be a wonderful place to meet people and to hone your writing skills, if that is your ambition. I hope it works out well for you.

Good luck!