Hello @omegarojo827,
The Ink Well is a community for short story writers. I appreciate the deep thought and work that went into this review, but this comminity is not the correct venue for a book review. Hive does have a book review community. In the future, you should post such an essay there. If you would like to re-write this so that it is an original piece again (don't copy and paste--that gets you in hot water), then perhaps Hive Book Club Community would be a good place for you (I've submitted a couple of reviews there myself).

If you would like to write a short story, with some of these ideas as a theme, we would welcome that story. Also, our prompts (this week A Matter of Time) might be helpful in giving you ideas for a short story.